Today we are talking about firsts, not just mine... but those of one of my characters. So where to start? Let's pick The Plan. It's my next release and one that features two very strong central characters.
Jonah - who just happens to be the head of the Department of Authority (yeah, the police chief essentially) and Kadie. A small time smuggler who gets caught by Jonah.
This book represents a number of firsts, both for myself as an author and the characters. For me, it was the first book outside my now completed Warriors of the Elector Series, my first time with a new publisher...
But I'm going to tease you a little. This scene isn't their first meeting, but the one where he's got her right where he wants her... and realises she just might be more than he can handle.
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Excerpt 1:
The man that arrested her, Captain Jonah Fielding, she had
heard of. A straight man, everyone agreed. He didn’t associate with the old, corrupt
Authorities. But at this point that’s cold
comfort. How can I possibly explain
that I have nothing else except my little Sugar Plum Fairy and that’s why I
took the chance? Her stomach rebelled and she dry heaved right there in the
cells as catcalls and laughter from other prisoners filled the air. Thank the Lights at least I am in a single
cell. Her head ached brutally and she wavered slightly, waiting for Captain
Fielding to send for her.
“Kadie Frost? Captain Fielding wants to see you.” The clank
of the cell door told her someone was coming; she struggled to her feet,
lifting tired, sore eyes.
A young man, little more than a boy really, with a freshly
pressed uniform marched in, unfastened her from the restraint loop, and pulled
her out the door and into an anonymous corridor.
Hoots and hollers met her ears as she allowed herself to be
paraded down the long walkway. As if
cattle in a moon-cow yard, she thought, closing her eyes as the Authority
man pulled her toward a heavy, metal door at the end of the corridor. He
stopped there and she opened her eyes, reading the sign on the door.
Interrogation Room
One. What a great name, she thought snidely. Really inventive.
The door opened slowly and she was quickly thrust inside.
The door snapped shut behind her as she looked around the bare room. A table
and two chairs sat, scarred and ugly, in the middle of the floor. The metal was
cold and glittering in the cool air as the air circulators pushed currents
around the frigid room. She made her way over and sat down, waiting for the
captain to enter. Her head drooped to the table and she let it rest, seeking
the refreshing cool on her overly hot skin.
Her hands stung and her eyes burned. She felt sorry for
herself as she thought about the mess she had gotten into, and she turned her
stinging hands to check the damage. They were bright red and radiated heat. The
deep scratches were swollen and weepy; sticky drops of goop coated the raw
skin. Never a good sign, she already knew that.
“Kadie Frost?”
She started. Obviously, the woolly, heavy feeling in her
head had overtaken her and she had dropped off to sleep as she waited. Her skin
burned against in the coolness of the room.
“That’s me.” Her head hurt viciously, but now she realized
her throat burned too.
“Captain Fielding is my name. I believe you and I can
discuss BXM parts?” He lifted an eyebrow and she noted the captain had the most
amazing blue eyes she had ever seen, teamed with long, black hair fastened at
the back of his neck, high cheeks, and impossibly chiseled features. He had
full, pink lips that would make a woman cry when they moved over hers. Huh? Where did that thought come from?
She blinked, dazed by the thought, and considered her plan
of attack. “What? Oh, the BXM parts.” She swallowed and felt the razor blades
she was sure were in her neck slashing from the inside which then proceeded to
burn. “They aren’t mine. They never were.”
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For the characters though, the firsts were so much bigger. The first kiss, the first touch. The first time either was able to say "I love you." The first meeting.
For Kadie there was her "first home" even. The Sugar Plum Fairy, was the first place she could call her own. The first time she was in charge of her destiny.
Yeah... but it's really not fair to keep you waiting so this next excerpt is something special
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Excerpt 2: Jonah grabbed some tissues from the box. He knew they were also a luxury and she would be wary, but he handed them over anyway, watching as she wiped away the residue of her tears.
“I don’t usually lose it like that.” She hiccupped slightly as she said the words in a husky, just-finished-crying voice.
“I didn’t think you did. Look, let’s start again, shall we? Hi. My name is Jonah. Pleased to meet you.” He gravely held out his hand, and a shy smile edged to the side of her lips as she took it. She still seemed wary, but accepted his hand. Jonah noted the calluses on her hands, as if she’d labored hard in her past.
“Hi, Jonah. I’m Kadie.”
He smiled. First step accomplished. “Let’s go see about grabbing you some clothes from your ship.” He watched as she turned beet red.
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Okay, for some of you, this will be the first time you've heard of me. If you are interested in my other titles, visit either Amazon or Barnes and Noble or my website for more information.
So I'm going to give away 2 prizes. (Yay!)
The first one is simple. Comment on one of the excerpts... The best comment either what you liked, what you hope will happen etc) will win a copy of The Plan (an ARC! Woo Hoo!) It is in ebook format so you can read it on any device!
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