Ru’Edan Home world
Timestamp 01-090-19-7298451
Scene – Zenith
Solstice
Several high
priestesses gathered around a single rock monument, in the middle of the desert
sands of Fu’jar province. Women holding their naked, newly birthed daughters in
their arms, waited for the ceremony to begin.
Other female priestesses take their places, squatting among the rocky
outcrops, many holding ancient instruments in their hands. They start chanting in time with the lowing
horns of the beasts of burden, and the beating measure of drums. A breeze blows warm air, faintly scented with
the grasses being harvested in the distant fields.
Fiemanskar, the high
priestess, steps from the circle of four practitioners positioned around the
monument. The robes of her ceremonial gown, adorned with glittering gold and
silver, drags on the dirt and rocks as she moves. She takes an offered child in her hands, lifting
the babe into the air; it wriggles and squalls in distress at the removal from
its mother. The child is an offering to
the goddess who protects this planet; she is now destined to become one of the
priestesses, virginal and pure, tending the sacred fires. Her mother sobs piteously behind the
priestess and for an instant a stab of pain moves through the priestess,
knowing the long and lonely life the child will experience. Then she brushes it aside. The child is chosen.
The four priestesses around
the stone begin to gyrate, their eyes closed as they move to the beat only they
can hear. The herbs they took before the
ceremony have opened their minds to a higher plane of thought, allowing them to
interact with the goddess in this time honored fashion.
This single Zenith
Solstice Ritual can only take place once in each solar cycle. At the solstice, they gather before dawn, the
cooler air refreshing before the heat of the day fills the air with oppressive warmth. She nods as the child finally ceases its
movements, as if it’s spirit has now absorbed the will of the goddess. Slowly Fiemanskar lowers her arms, the
precious bundle lying silent and still in her arms. The act of the offering will bring the planet
good fortune for the ensuing cycle. The
mother will be well compensated, entering into the band of handmaidens who
serve within the temples.
“Eiis Ellane Vorgar
Schevst Eiis Eiis Eiis” are intoned with great ceremony, the same words that had
been spoken for generations at this time.
A handmaiden proffers her the ceremonial wrap of gold and silver, and
the child is carefully enfolded within the soft folds. A flying prey creature, squawks in the
distance and Fiemanskar smiles, knowing the goddess has accepted this offering.
In this blog, I thought I would bring you just a snippet of
what I imagine, would be a ritual that only takes place in high summer.
Because most of my books take place either on a ship, or for
the coming Star of the Fleet, on an inhabited asteroid, I wanted to paint a
picture of something that takes place on the Ru’Edan home world. I like to think that the planet-based citizens are similar to
us, though. With their religions and
ceremonies, strictly observed by a public who worships them, they have little
understanding of the daily life of a priestess, of the planet they inhabit.
This is a planet that does not necessarily see women, as the
equal of men, hence the reason for the interruption between the genders which shows up in the books.
You will notice none of the fathers are present. The women, as I have imagined them, are
secretive, considered lesser to the men, and the fathers take little or no
interest in the upbringing of their daughters.
This is essentially borne out in the actions of Crick Sur Banden, who
sees women as nothing more than breeders of his army. It is an intensely patriarchal society, although the more enlightened high class (caste) members are more likely to value their daughters.
As for the child who will become a priestess? Her lot is to be taken
back to the temple, her mother accompanying her for as long as the child needs
her for the child is not yet weaned. In this case, the child is only
newly born, I imagine less than a month old, so her mother is required to feed her still. Once the child is old
enough, the mother will relocate to another temple to serve another priestess.
The child sent to a different province, maternal ties smashed, as the child’s
future includes being brought up to be a priestess, immured in the roles and
rituals.
This is singularly,
the most important ritual of the cycle for these women. This is the only time when priestesses are chosen
and only one can be accepted at each temple per cycle. This scene takes place in the main
temple, where Fiemanskar resides with fellow high priestesses, it is the most
prestigious, situated on the main continent, making the child doubly blessed. There is no choice the mothers must present their daughters as offerings.
Once the ceremony has
ended, the priestesses then commune back to the temple to participate in a
feast and a solemn ceremony. Ancient and forbidden, it cannot be discussed with
those outside the temple walls. (Which is why I can’t tell you any more about
it.)
In the streets people
celebrate the coming year, leaving
offerings of food, clothing and even coin for the priestesses. It is a general holiday among the
populace. Of course, such celebrations
will only be for half the globe, as the other half will have to wait for their
Zenith Solstice to occur.
Imogene
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Great snippet and interesting background, Imogene. It's fun creating another world and society, isn't it. Looking forward to reading the other books.
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Thanks hun - I look forward to hearing what you think.
DeleteHi Imogene,
ReplyDeleteI'm certain your stories will be a success they sound fascinating and otherworldly.
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Hi Imogene,
ReplyDeleteI am certain that your stories will be a success, they sound fascinating and otherworldly.
Love those covers too.
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Effie
Hi i read your review and thank you. Now i want to read the book to find out what happens to these womwn who become prietess and how they treat the other women in their society. I will put your book on my reading list and wait to see if i win lol. If not i will go right out and get it on ebook. I am disabled and i can spened the money on the rest of your books if i win this one. Can't afford to waste money. Thanks again Joannie jscddmj[at]aol[dot]com
ReplyDeleteThanks Joannie and goodluck :)
DeleteGreat snippet, Imogene!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pippa!
DeleteI enjoyed writing it too.
I love the look into your books. Thanks for the snippet.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome JC!
DeleteI always love a peek inside the internal workings of an author's world. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteDawn
I think it is fascinating to find out about the inner workings of the worlds other authors create too. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the scene.
DeleteLovely writing, and great world building in such few words. Thanks for sharing your books.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the feedback Arlene...writing can be a very solitary thing, so it's always nice to hear others enjoy what we craft.
DeleteLovely! Fun idea to explore. :-)
ReplyDeletePauline, thank you so much for the feedback!
DeleteHi Imogene
ReplyDeleteLoved your excerpt and it's obvious you share my own love of world building. I've not yet had chance to read your books, but I'm certainly going to put them on my 'wish list'!
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! I will also be interested to see what you think of the series!
DeleteHappy reading!
Your idea for a ritual was both heartbreaking and beautiful. Great post.
ReplyDeleteYou know, while the whole concept is intensely sad, I really enjoyed creating the mental picture of the ritual as I feel it really resonates with the characters from the Ru'Edan worlds.
DeleteI really loved your post.
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Thanks Artemis! I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it!
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Thanks Sue B. I am pleased your found it interesting! Happy Reading.
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Thanks Liana, I appreciate your visiting my blog today!
DeleteI love your world building with a mix of mythology and SF! I must say your covers are simply gorgeous, too! I couldn't take my eyes off the pretty hehe.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rae.
DeleteYeah I love my covers too! Each one is so beautiful, so I have them on the walls of my hallway as decorations!
The mythology was really important to me, as I felt it was necessary to understand my characters motivations.
Great post - now I'm very intrigued by your books. Thanks for the snippet
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DeleteWhat an amazing world you've created.
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DeleteWhat a fascinating world you have created. Thanks for the snippet and the chance to win Starfire.
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Thanks Pam, I appreciate your visiting my blog today! Good luck with the draw!
DeleteI like that idea that the child will become a priestess, although a lonely life. Great snipet!
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Thanks Jessica!
DeleteYeah, it kind of fills out the characters motivations as well as seeing a ritual in action.
Isn't making up religions fun?
ReplyDeleteIt really is, Sue Ann!
DeleteInteresting world-building. Thanks for sharing your snippet.
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DeleteThanks for the fantastic excerpt & the amazing giveaway!
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Thanks Elizabeth. Good luck with the draw!
DeleteLove the post! I need to check these books out. Thanks for a chance to win!
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Thanks Susan! I look forward to hearing with you think!
DeleteIt's an interesting patriarchal society. Isn't it fun creating societies? Just as difficult as worlds, really.
ReplyDeleteGreta, I really enjoyed creating the world with the disconnect between the two genders. In actual fact though, this ties in far more closely than I planned with the third novel! So it was a great opportunity to create something that would "round" out the world and mythology behind the society.
DeleteThanks everyone for your amazing comments. I love writing, even though I am rather new :) But your comments certainly make it feel so very worthwhile!
ReplyDeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for popping by Kimber!
DeleteI really enjoyed the picture you created with your snippet - a rich and interesting culture. Makes me want to read a lot more about it. :)
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Cheryl I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the series!
DeleteInteresting snippet, Imogene, and perfect for Midsummer!
ReplyDeleteThanks TK!
DeleteWhat rich worldbuilding!
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane for your feedback!
DeleteEnjoyed your post very much! Thanks for the contest!
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Thanks fairytail :)
DeleteWow. Nice one, Imogene. I'm very curious. I want to know where this is going. And I really want to know more about this baby. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Whitney - I am glad you enjoyed the scene.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet and wow those are so beautiful covers you have! I have put them on my TBR list now :) Thanks for being part of the hop I love finding "new to me authors"
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Thanks Dawn. I really love my covers too! Looking forward to your thoughts when you read the books! Thanks for popping by.
ReplyDeleteWOW Imogene! This is really intense. The ritual goes to show that even a newborn child cannot escape following the chosen path. No matter what, the child must fulfil it's destiny. I imagine that the ritual would encompass high-born as well as low-born babes - confirming to the people that the chosen one is destined for the position.
ReplyDeleteThanks Natasha for your feedback. Yes, it is immaterial their standing, although it is rare that a child from the head of the household is chosen. :)
ReplyDeleteVery good stuff! I am imagining that a priestess in your book(s) steps 'out of line' and falls in love. There would be a lot of conflict with that. I can't wait to read! The covers of your books are fantastic too!
ReplyDeleteWhoah, I just posted a comment and it says June 27, 2012 at 2:29AM. It is June 26, 2012 at 12:30PM here now. I feel like I just posted into the future! LOL!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kyndra, for your comments. Yeah, we are technically in your future! Way Cool :)
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