Thursday, June 21, 2012

MidSummer Science Fiction Brigade Blog Hop!


Ru’Edan Home world
Timestamp 01-090-19-7298451
Scene – Zenith Solstice

Several high priestesses gathered around a single rock monument, in the middle of the desert sands of Fu’jar province. Women holding their naked, newly birthed daughters in their arms, waited for the ceremony to begin.  Other female priestesses take their places, squatting among the rocky outcrops, many holding ancient instruments in their hands.  They start chanting in time with the lowing horns of the beasts of burden, and the beating measure of drums.  A breeze blows warm air, faintly scented with the grasses being harvested in the distant fields.

Fiemanskar, the high priestess, steps from the circle of four practitioners positioned around the monument. The robes of her ceremonial gown, adorned with glittering gold and silver, drags on the dirt and rocks as she moves.  She takes an offered child in her hands, lifting the babe into the air; it wriggles and squalls in distress at the removal from its mother.  The child is an offering to the goddess who protects this planet; she is now destined to become one of the priestesses, virginal and pure, tending the sacred fires.   Her mother sobs piteously behind the priestess and for an instant a stab of pain moves through the priestess, knowing the long and lonely life the child will experience.  Then she brushes it aside.  The child is chosen.

The four priestesses around the stone begin to gyrate, their eyes closed as they move to the beat only they can hear.  The herbs they took before the ceremony have opened their minds to a higher plane of thought, allowing them to interact with the goddess in this time honored fashion.  

This single Zenith Solstice Ritual can only take place once in each solar cycle.  At the solstice, they gather before dawn, the cooler air refreshing before the heat of the day fills the air with oppressive warmth.  She nods as the child finally ceases its movements, as if it’s spirit has now absorbed the will of the goddess.  Slowly Fiemanskar lowers her arms, the precious bundle lying silent and still in her arms.  The act of the offering will bring the planet good fortune for the ensuing cycle.  The mother will be well compensated, entering into the band of handmaidens who serve within the temples.

“Eiis Ellane Vorgar Schevst Eiis Eiis Eiis” are intoned with great ceremony, the same words that had been spoken for generations at this time.  A handmaiden proffers her the ceremonial wrap of gold and silver, and the child is carefully enfolded within the soft folds.  A flying prey creature, squawks in the distance and Fiemanskar smiles, knowing the goddess has accepted this offering.

In this blog, I thought I would bring you just a snippet of what I imagine, would be a ritual that only takes place in high summer.  

Because most of my books take place either on a ship, or for the coming Star of the Fleet, on an inhabited asteroid, I wanted to paint a picture of something that takes place on the Ru’Edan home world.  I like to think that the planet-based citizens are similar to us, though.  With their religions and ceremonies, strictly observed by a public who worships them, they have little understanding of the daily life of a priestess, of the planet they inhabit.  

This is a planet that does not necessarily see women, as the equal of men, hence the reason for the interruption between the genders which shows up in the books.

You will notice none of the fathers are present.  The women, as I have imagined them, are secretive, considered lesser to the men, and the fathers take little or no interest in the upbringing of their daughters.  This is essentially borne out in the actions of Crick Sur Banden, who sees women as nothing more than breeders of his army. It is an intensely patriarchal society, although the more enlightened high class (caste) members are more likely to value their daughters.

As for the child who will become a priestess?  Her lot is to be taken back to the temple, her mother accompanying her for as long as the child needs her for the child is not yet weaned.  In this case, the child is only newly born, I imagine less than a month old, so her mother is required to feed  her still.  Once the child is old enough, the mother will relocate to another temple to serve another priestess. The child sent to a different province, maternal ties smashed, as the child’s future includes being brought up to be a priestess, immured in the roles and rituals.

This is  singularly, the most important ritual of the cycle for these women.  This is the only time when priestesses are chosen and only one can be accepted at each temple per cycle. This scene takes place in the main temple, where Fiemanskar resides with  fellow high priestesses, it is the most prestigious, situated on the main continent, making the child doubly blessed.  There is  no choice the mothers must present  their  daughters as offerings.

Once the ceremony has ended, the priestesses then commune back to the temple to participate in a feast and a solemn ceremony. Ancient and forbidden, it cannot be discussed with those outside the temple walls. (Which is why I can’t tell you any more about it.)  

In the streets people  celebrate the coming year, leaving offerings of food, clothing and even coin for the priestesses.  It is a general holiday among the populace.  Of course, such celebrations will only be for half the globe, as the other half will have to wait for their Zenith Solstice to occur.


Imogene

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72 comments:

  1. Great snippet and interesting background, Imogene. It's fun creating another world and society, isn't it. Looking forward to reading the other books.
    Alison

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    1. Thanks hun - I look forward to hearing what you think.

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  2. Hi Imogene,

    I'm certain your stories will be a success they sound fascinating and otherworldly.

    Smiles,
    Effie

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  3. Hi Imogene,

    I am certain that your stories will be a success, they sound fascinating and otherworldly.

    Love those covers too.

    Smiles,
    Effie

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  4. Hi i read your review and thank you. Now i want to read the book to find out what happens to these womwn who become prietess and how they treat the other women in their society. I will put your book on my reading list and wait to see if i win lol. If not i will go right out and get it on ebook. I am disabled and i can spened the money on the rest of your books if i win this one. Can't afford to waste money. Thanks again Joannie jscddmj[at]aol[dot]com

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  5. I love the look into your books. Thanks for the snippet.

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  6. I always love a peek inside the internal workings of an author's world. Thanks for sharing.

    Dawn

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    1. I think it is fascinating to find out about the inner workings of the worlds other authors create too. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the scene.

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  7. Lovely writing, and great world building in such few words. Thanks for sharing your books.

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    1. Thanks so much for the feedback Arlene...writing can be a very solitary thing, so it's always nice to hear others enjoy what we craft.

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  8. Lovely! Fun idea to explore. :-)

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  9. Hi Imogene

    Loved your excerpt and it's obvious you share my own love of world building. I've not yet had chance to read your books, but I'm certainly going to put them on my 'wish list'!

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    1. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! I will also be interested to see what you think of the series!

      Happy reading!

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  10. Your idea for a ritual was both heartbreaking and beautiful. Great post.

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    1. You know, while the whole concept is intensely sad, I really enjoyed creating the mental picture of the ritual as I feel it really resonates with the characters from the Ru'Edan worlds.

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  11. I really loved your post.
    Thank you for the giveaways!
    Artemis

    artgiote at gmail dot com

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    1. Thanks Artemis! I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it!

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  12. Great post. Very interesting. Thanks for being a part of the blog hop.
    Sue B
    katsrus(at)gmail(dot)com

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    1. Thanks Sue B. I am pleased your found it interesting! Happy Reading.

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  13. Wonderful post!

    liana.brooks1(at)gmail(dot)com

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    1. Thanks Liana, I appreciate your visiting my blog today!

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  14. I love your world building with a mix of mythology and SF! I must say your covers are simply gorgeous, too! I couldn't take my eyes off the pretty hehe.

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    1. Thanks Rae.

      Yeah I love my covers too! Each one is so beautiful, so I have them on the walls of my hallway as decorations!

      The mythology was really important to me, as I felt it was necessary to understand my characters motivations.

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  15. Great post - now I'm very intrigued by your books. Thanks for the snippet

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    1. Thanks Natalie. It is always great to get positive feedback.

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  16. What an amazing world you've created.

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  17. Great sounding books! Fun post! Thanks for sharing and for the fun hop!
    shadowluvs2read(at)gmail(dot)com

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  18. What a fascinating world you have created. Thanks for the snippet and the chance to win Starfire.

    Pam
    vanillaorchids69(at)gmail(dot)com

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    1. Thanks Pam, I appreciate your visiting my blog today! Good luck with the draw!

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  19. I like that idea that the child will become a priestess, although a lonely life. Great snipet!

    All the best!
    Jess
    jessicasubject.writer at gmail dot com

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    1. Thanks Jessica!

      Yeah, it kind of fills out the characters motivations as well as seeing a ritual in action.

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  20. Interesting world-building. Thanks for sharing your snippet.

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  21. Thanks for the fantastic excerpt & the amazing giveaway!

    elizabeth @ bookattict . com
    GFC: BookAttict

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  22. Love the post! I need to check these books out. Thanks for a chance to win!
    suz2(at)cox(dot)net

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    1. Thanks Susan! I look forward to hearing with you think!

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  23. It's an interesting patriarchal society. Isn't it fun creating societies? Just as difficult as worlds, really.

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    1. Greta, I really enjoyed creating the world with the disconnect between the two genders. In actual fact though, this ties in far more closely than I planned with the third novel! So it was a great opportunity to create something that would "round" out the world and mythology behind the society.

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  24. Thanks everyone for your amazing comments. I love writing, even though I am rather new :) But your comments certainly make it feel so very worthwhile!

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  25. I really enjoyed the picture you created with your snippet - a rich and interesting culture. Makes me want to read a lot more about it. :)

    Cheryl
    cheryl(at)cherylcorbin(dot)com

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    1. Cheryl I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the series!

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  26. Interesting snippet, Imogene, and perfect for Midsummer!

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  27. What rich worldbuilding!

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  28. Enjoyed your post very much! Thanks for the contest!

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  29. Thanks Liz, I am so pleased you enjoyed it!

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  30. Cool hop and with my favorite kind of books!

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  31. Interesting books!

    kazouaher12 AT hotmail DOT com

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  32. Wow. Nice one, Imogene. I'm very curious. I want to know where this is going. And I really want to know more about this baby. :)

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  33. Thanks Whitney - I am glad you enjoyed the scene.

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  34. Great snippet and wow those are so beautiful covers you have! I have put them on my TBR list now :) Thanks for being part of the hop I love finding "new to me authors"
    Dawn
    drmgrl99atyahoodotcom

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  35. Thanks Dawn. I really love my covers too! Looking forward to your thoughts when you read the books! Thanks for popping by.

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  36. WOW Imogene! This is really intense. The ritual goes to show that even a newborn child cannot escape following the chosen path. No matter what, the child must fulfil it's destiny. I imagine that the ritual would encompass high-born as well as low-born babes - confirming to the people that the chosen one is destined for the position.

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  37. Thanks Natasha for your feedback. Yes, it is immaterial their standing, although it is rare that a child from the head of the household is chosen. :)

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  38. Very good stuff! I am imagining that a priestess in your book(s) steps 'out of line' and falls in love. There would be a lot of conflict with that. I can't wait to read! The covers of your books are fantastic too!

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  39. Whoah, I just posted a comment and it says June 27, 2012 at 2:29AM. It is June 26, 2012 at 12:30PM here now. I feel like I just posted into the future! LOL!

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  40. Thanks Kyndra, for your comments. Yeah, we are technically in your future! Way Cool :)

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