Continuing the Encounters With guest blogs, today we are joined by Jaleta Clegg! Welcome Jaleta!
I've asked my Encounters guests to tell me something they've learned during the process of working on their current work in progress. This is Jaleta's take.
Lessons Learned from Writing Poisoned Pawn
1. Never edit when you're tired and frustrated. You'll cut so
much out, the scene you just edited resembles the chopped liver monster from
The Muppet Show.
I was dealing with a lot of Real Life while editing this book.
I'm embarrassed that a couple of scenes got past me and the final editorial
pass. I chopped them to pieces and tried to re-assemble them, and the poor
things came out like Frankenstein's monster. But deadlines are harsh masters.
2. Don't be married to any scene or character. Do what's best for
the story. Some scenes just have to go.
A couple of my favorites got chopped from this book. A good
friend pointed out that the first half wandered around and wasn't that
interesting. I cut many fun scenes in the interest of getting to the meat
faster. (Hmm, another zombie reference? I must be craving steak again.)
3. Don't be afraid of emotion. Stark, raw emotion can be very
frightening, especially when it's yours and you just put it on paper for the
world to see.
I shy away from showing emotion. The main character, Dace, has a
lot of horrible things happen to her. I'm writing the story in first person. I
can't put distance between the reader and the raw emotion without losing the
impact of the scene. But it's really hard. Walking-in-public-in-my-underwear
hard.
4. Believe in yourself, above all. Everyone has a doubt monster
living in their head that whispers, "You're no good." Learn to shove
that doubt monster into a corner and throw a towel over its head.
Dace
and Jasyn have everything they ever wanted - their own trading ship and
freedom.
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Jaleta Clegg loves creating worlds and spinning stories about
everything. Her stories range from science fiction adventure to silly horror to
everything in between. She enjoys piecing quilts, crocheting weird things, and
cooking. She'd enjoy gardening except she has a black thumb and can kill
zucchini. Nothing more tender stands a chance. You can find more at
www.jaletac.com
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Thanks for joining me, Jaleta! We look forward to seeing your work soon!
Imogene
Thanks so much for hosting me!
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